I thought about what theblank said about my poem. That it could be more creative. So I decided to revise it.
So here's the new revised version if my poem:
Kibble
Kibble
Kibble Kibble Kibble
Kibble Kibble
Kibble Kibble
Kibble Kibble Kibble
Kibble
Kibble
I really like Kibble.
I know it had some flaws before but now I think it's ok.
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1 comment:
Nice revision. You are a born writer.
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